Storm Rider, by Cassie Edwards
Storm Rider was that man!
Soon the Snake’s evil deeds would be a thing of the past. Then, and only then, could Storm Rider think of other things…most important, having a woman in his blankets to love, to cherish.
And then there would be children!
Tabitha Daniel became Talking Rain the day her parents were killed and she was taken in by the Chief of the Crow tribe. She was accepted as a member of the tribe, even though her blonde beauty and independent spirit set her apart. Then Chief Storm Rider shows up wanted to reach a compromise with the Crows and Talking Rain finds herself drawn to him. When a stunt goes too far Talking Rain finds herself a captive of Storm Rider and she is at his mercy.
I found the story melodramatic and the writing tedious. They were obssessed with one another at the very first look and there were pages and pages filled with alternating lustful and resisting thoughts and feelings without any real action. And, while I love a good exclamation point ! there were so many that it was distracting. (Have you ever watched the Seinfeld episode where Elaine edited a book and used an ! every other sentence? Then you know what I’m talking about.)
Cassie Edwards is a New York Times Bestselling Author, so I have to think I just read one of her less successful titles. I don’t think I’d read another by her, but if you have a favorite, leave a comment.